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Revenge part 1-Deisaso

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Revenge part 1- DeiSaso

Deidara and Konan sit down on the grass. It is a beautiful morning and they have break. Other pupils are sitting around them also enjoying the sunny weather. Everyone is in a good mood because it is their last day at school before the summer holidays beginning. Suddenly they hear a loud yell from a table on the other side of the school yard. Deidara and all the others notice a red haired person who laughes at a cute brown haired girl with all his friends standing behind him.

Deidara: "What the hell is that idiot doing with Leila, un? Let´s walk over there and help her!"

He stands up with an angry expression in his face. As he arrives besides Leila the red head eyes him.

"Hey blondie! Do you want to help your little friend? How sweet!"

His friends giggle.

"Shut the hell up, you bastard, un!"

Deidara turns to Leila. She cries a bit.

"Sasori! Y-ou...you don´t mean that, do you? You always said that you love me."

Sasori smiles cruelly: "Oh, the world is so mean, right? Everybody lies and nobody does what you want! Poor little LeiLei! But yeah, actually I just told you that stuff because you wanted to hear it!"

"That´s not true!!!" Leila sobs loudly.

"Haha! You´re as stupid as all the other girls I dated! I never loved one of you! You were just a good fuck for me, a toy!"

Leila´s eyes widen and her sob becomes convulsive. Rapidly she runs away. Sasori and his gang laugh spiteful. Deidara looks at them angrily and thinks about yelling at them but then he skips that thought and follows Leila.
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Leila hides in one of the girl toilets.

"Please Leila! Let me in, un!"

"Go away!"

"Believe me, it will be better, when somebody is there to hold you!"

"..."

"Leila, I´m your friend,un. Please!"

Deidara drums against the cabin. After a minute of silence the door opens slowly. It hurts him to see her sad reddened eyes... Without any words he hugs his friend while she cries quietly. The only feeling in his heart is hate. Hate for the person who broke his best friends heart. Hate for the person who is an total asshole to everyone. To the one who thinks he could do everything he wants. Sasori Akasuna.
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A few minutes later:

Leila slowly calms down and starts talking:
"I-I really loved him, you know? I cannot believe that...that he is...like that. He...he always was so cute b-but now...I don´t understand him! Why? W-what was my fault? W-what did I d-do wrong, Dei?"

"Shhh, honey, calm down! You didn´t do anything wrong! He is like this...he is an total asshole! Try to forget him!"

He wipes her tears away.

"T-that isn´t easy, Dei! How can I handle it? How can I look into his eyes without loosing control? He...he will do it again and again...he will break more hearts! I want to stop him! Otherwise I won´t ever be happy again...Please Dei! Help me! I want to see his heart breaking in pain!"

"But how can I help you, un???"

"Hmmm, I don´t know, let me guess... "

The bell rings suddenly. The next lesson will begin in about two minutes. Deidara opens the door.

"Wait Dei! Let´s meet after school at your house! I promise, I will have a plan...or don´t you want to help me?!"

"Of course I do want to! I would do anything to see that bastard suffer! Well, then let´s meet this evening."

They walk into different classrooms.
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Deidara´s teacher isn´t there already. He sits down on his chair. Out of nowhere a hand touches his shoulder slightly. He turns around and sees...Sasori who grins widely.

"Hey blondie! What´s about your hysterical friend? What was her name...ah, LeiLei!"

"Shut the hell up, you fucking monster, un!"

Deidara turns around again, His face is read because of his anger. He wants to hit him...blow his fucking face away and see him die slowly... Just then the teacher finally arrives in the classroom, so that Sasori hasn't got another chance to risk his life.
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In the evening:

Somebody knocks on the door. Deidara stands up slowly and opens. It´s Leila. Her eyes are still red and puffy but they look angry, not sad! The two of them walk into Deidara´s room and sit down on the bed.

"So, what´s about your plan, un?"

Leila smiles cruelly: "Well, I thought it would be perfect to break him the same way!"

Deidara eyes her confused.

"You know...somebody has to break his heart the same way as he does it all the time. Sasori has to love this person more than anything in his life. He has to be like a little dog. Begging for the love of this special person, getting attention and then falling into darkness... Darkness... because this one will break his heart!" She smiles eagerly.  "What do you think?"


"The plan is...great but there is just one problem: who is this special person,un?"

"Yeah...I have somebody in my mind...but..."

"Spit it out, un!"
" You!"

"What? ARE YOU CRAZY,UN? I DON`T WANT TO MAKE MOONEYES AT SASORI AKASUNA,UN!"


Deidara calms down a bit as he sees her scared face.
"Sorry, but it wouldn´t work, un! He isn´t interested in me and never will be. He isn´t gay, un!"

"That´s not true! He is interested in both, girls and boys. That devil fucks everything and as his ex-girlfriend I know best what he likes. Sometimes he stared at your ass as you crossed our way...I ignored it because I thought that he loved me... I believe that you are the only one who could win his heart, trust me! But for that we have to change some things.."

She stares at him with big eyes.
"Please, Dei!"  

"No, un!"

"Sweet heart?!"  

"..No, un!"  

"Do it for me!"  

"NO, un!"  

"Well, if you want to...my heart won´t ever heal, but screw it! I only thought that my best friend would desire having the chance  to help me..."

She turns around, ready to go.

"Wait, un...Yeah, I´ll do this..."

She grins then she hugs him happily.
"Thank you, Dei!"

"You know how to change my opinion, you witch, un!" Then he laughs:" This will be interesting!"

"No, this will be fun!"
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Later Deidara lays down on his bed.

"I wonder what ideas she has got to change me into somebody "perfect" for that bastard, un... But I´ll hear that tomorrow,un... Jay, I look forward to break him completely..." He smiles: "You will suffer, Sasori Akasuna, un! I will turn your life into hell, un! Soon..."

He closes his eyes and drops off.
Well, this is my first attempt to write a own story of Naruto. This part is about Deidara and Sasori...:)
I hope you´ll enjoy reading. Please tell me what you think! And say, if I should do more stuff like this!:D


Second part: [link]
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Kathlan315's avatar

hmm. I don't know if I should be angry that she linked Deidara and Sasori together or happy because it's going to be the beginning of a friendship...(please tell me this is NOT tragedy, as in Saso doesn't get love, Dei breaks his heart and kills Saso. Inside or Out.)

 

This is an awesome beginning. I wanna read more.